Revised sonnet #54
At Whites Beach wind bends coprosoma strands
The toitoi hold their ground on close exam
The clay track twists till sand there self disbands
Against the bluff the constant breakers slam
Hes fond of fabled felon laugh on lam
George Wilder caper clifftop altitude
In vacant cottage civil giving damn
The note he leaves in large oozed gratitude
The shags and gannets fish in foaming swells
They wriggle kahawai out from the clinging kelp
I board the basking shark and give a yelp
He ushers me off it eyes worried wells
He praises red hair mine I rise in mood
Then praise him back on baby blue eyes viewed
Chorus mood aura feel