Revised sonnet #554
Disco dances lack concrete caresses
Clique of girls assigned to smallest spaces
Switch of seats sights set on proper places
Feel I hems of passing party dresses
Midst of high end store off rack successes
Shoulders anchor chiffon sheer to laces
Make up furthers finely featured faces
Sue the name if nudged to honest guesses
Primps and pouts of girls concur cocquettish
Got to give the cleavage quiver credit
Strappy sandals swirl they fish for fetish
Hawkish gazes rake the room I dread it
Boys and girls of nervous nature many
Peel off pairs till singles scarcely any
Chorus many copious profuse
