Revised sonnet #57
My hair heavy hangs so sea spray laden
We view past the promontory narrow
Mapped out myth the maiden next to maiden
Peaks that play third suitor halve to harrow
Mute volcanoes lava like a marrow
Suitors play theyre stuck on maiden mountain
Inching barrow past the others barrow
Skipping suicide show as fiery fountain
She tossed him a wad of mint unmarked cash
She asked him to shoo away the daughters
Wild teens hers and drawn to manly moustache
Nothing stronger served than bottled waters
Every second souls a boy theyre on tap
Bar tsunami strike or lightning ball zap
Chorus tap faucet valve
