Revised sonnet #544
Love her quote mark cheek dimples sorted smiles
Love her toes wiggling stuck in hot high heels
Love her talk twisted full of worldly wiles
Love her laughs sighs and sentimental squeals
Love her nose ramp incline its point appeals
Love her long hair if coiled or heaped in piles
Love her unruly when a small thing riles
Love her huge hugs and furtive friendly feels
Think her a Venus she sifts skin tree ash
In mint and lavender oil specks turn smudge
Then weather bells and cannons give a nudge
To crowd of clouds to wash her clean in splash
Know mine a happy hat I wear Id doff
Know her unspoilt and strong thought odd one off
Chorus doff lift raise