Revised sonnet #50
Impulsively Ill blurt the dormant deed
Invade your meditative private space
The context wrong though phrases rightly read
Our lives are separate they interlace
And so a fluke it is Im granted grace
In gentle gaze yours sense I patient heed
The errors stack up grit and never seed
It dies a story set on saving face
I find it hard to quit effect and cause
I worship Saturns maw and origin
Alleged golden age of kith and kin
Thats Saturns period versus seguing pause
On all else we agree to disagree
I love to love you love to love just me
Chorus disagree counter oppose