sonnet Javv river now back

Javv rivers back eased from the dreary dead
Who couldve oxygenated your bile?
Your fish are thriving after long long while
Your mirrored clouds conceal muck more light shed
Your pointless pillars rise from swirls ahead
As modern ruins a bridge aced out of mile
The palms atop are precious plants theyre vile
Along the better bridge a bottleneck is fed
Two bridges later lead to flats of mud
The motor putters out and oars strike sea
We look at Tuenis island long off lee
The silt stinks like a gutted fish in crud
To baron Xomm we raise our beers as roast
The castle Ruarantine its plague proud host
Chorus roast critique pillory