Revised sonnet #9

The finer fingers hers to hold invite

The fatter fingers mine in hers expand

The veins are violet next to knuckles white

They link like loops of skinny rubber band

Once her eyes moisten soft they understand

I sometimes struggle much and see self sook

Ill minimise a friend the fight at hand

In backtrack feeble fresh opponents brook

Yet she insists Im loyal alone on hook

And she agrees to mosey by abyss

And she exerts a sympathetic look

And she imparts a captivating kiss

I thought that true love excluded pain

A wary man I was way wrong again

Chorus pain ache twinge

Revised sonnet #7

I smile as shes cute

And wears a wimple

I listen lulled mute

Her singsong simple

Her balanced brow knits

At overdone clap

A new idea flits

I turn to toe tap

From excellent eyes

I wouldnt dare part

Her eloquent art

Oppresses raw sighs

Her words are airy

Her passions vary

Chorus airy breezy draughty

Revised sonnet #8

I found the jellyfish across the beach

As dead as dodos after hurricane

Immortal otherwise inside your reach

To polyps never shall they shrink again

Above tide mark in sun scorched sandy leach

I further found anemones thus slain

I touched those toxic tendrils dried out each

A nod to metal chicken weather vane

You seem a painted statue retro grand

You suffer skin tags often stay in sick

Id clone you body parts except those ick

I love you lots and lots you understand

Across the dead dry driftwood will I cut

Your name you validate a daily rut

Chorus cut nick slice

Revised sonnet #4

A dreary dolour dolled up gush of glee

A nuanced esteem on criminal mislaid

A negative alliance when granted lee

A legal loophole slavishly obeyed

A bullys victim broken forced to flee

A slip through crack and into darkest shade

A natural end based on pent up pee

A rubberneck of accident and aid

A never was in wastrel humblebrag

A leaking pipe to bucket echoed plop

A public park that pongs of bovine dag

A virtue signalled by the stingiest sop

The world is full of silly stuff I fear

I moan its ruin as others oddly swear

Chorus fear cringe dread

Revised sonnet #2

Old pal own up to dirty deeds youve done

Blackberries prick and river deltas silt

The game of lost and found is never fun

Id rather not affect the judge and jilt

Ive known you ages flatting on or off

You covet all the clothes in which I dress

I cast you hint the artificial cough

I wouldnt want a copycat excess

Your life I view as fun and beautiful

Though different if gauged against that mine

In other zones I find you dutiful

You like your cooking chores to soups incline

The borrowed blouses creased and full of lint

Affordable are when youre scarcely skint

Chorus lint fluff pile

Revised sonnet #3

The plight of gorgeous people who arrest

The public eye is leisurely decline

From drop dead doll to pretty cute at best

In sugared vase of water flowers fare fine

Youre such a person from that chichi class

Your potty patter people overgloss

It drags you down to general morass

I reckon rude or start of hearing loss

And since you havent spawned a single heir

Your great inheritance is up for grabs

Your nihilism if naughty does endear

You reccommend a novel cure for crabs

Yet theres that threat too terminal disease

Yes look at parenthood it wont displease

Chorus disease illness malaise

Revised sonnet #6

In rendezvous park

Lank platinum hairs

Against old root bark

The voyeur in me rears

Her puzzling eyes spark

Her phlegmy throat clears

Her cleavage tilt squares

Her studious brows arc

On terms her thoughts weigh

A pout and lip bite

A flick of page right

Then butterfly stray

A fool I was late

I found her prostrate

Chorus late overdue tardy

Revised sonnet #5

A trap to tresses

Of filigree gold

The hair net presses

Her braids her strands hold

Mens looks her way rolled

In yellow waves trawl

If mesmerised bold

Theirs lobster like crawl

Delinquent eyes mine

Again adore her

I sigh while supine

Entrapped as it were

If adulated

Shes calculated

Chorus adulated toasted worshipped

Revised sonnet #1

As winter sun her wall eyes worrisome

A mako shark concedes that chiselled chin

If cellulite engulfs her baggy bum

A muted mustache plays above her grin

Delicious ruddy apples row on row

Yet less her rosacea cheek filigree

Delirious grassy gas just after mow

Yet less her breath of spliff and slur of scree

Ive valued most her smirk and guffaw since

No better foil to my own gifts Ive found

Dont mention catwalk models how they mince

My muse must waddle earthy quake the ground

That missus mine no beauty bias to freak

In biddies boobs Ive merely sticky beak

Chorus freak oddball peculiarity

excerpt from Venus After Mars

Act 1 Scene 1

Eastern turbined tower

A pinch of pixie dust no minor thing

To sneeze at winter coming up next month

Ill sniff a decent dose of pepper too

Immunity to strength is stirred by shock

A shock in small diverts calamity

It cancels dogs of war at city gates

And pixie sawdust peacetime solid makes

The swirl of dreams the liquids into cakes

The pixies forest folk are magical

As early warning system our best pals

I wasted war dog eyes and nostrils once

In brutal war with pixie pepper puffs

They growled and leapt on me to maul to death

I puffed them on their backs and how they whined

As if invoking tummy tickle time

Instead I tickled their eyes and snouts

The pepper turning foam which set like glue

Id have done same Ive worthier battle scars

Dying like a dog is but a canine thing-

Revised sonnet #1243

You shouldnt biff good money after bad
You didnt smell at first that something stank
I said as much that hes a clever cad
The legal fees enough to break your bank
The boiler room an office dark and dank
You backed the fund of his upcoming fad
You packed the multistorey urban pad
You winced the while your solid balance sank
Youve let emotions cloud your state of mind
Youre standing stockstill on your own two feet
Youll wonder how the latest stars aligned
I know that karma will accost your cheat
I fear the fall out from your maudlin mum
Time testy like this well act deftly dumb
Chorus mum ma mom

Revised sonnet #1244

I felt alone at last then down in dumps
She sashayed over launched a sassy smile
I got a gentle vibe its female guile
I hadnt hustled off of other chumps
I rolled a gaze across adjacent rumps
I moved the variations to mental file
A beer and pretzels staved off building bile
I nodded heaped hair hers her dress and pumps
I shouted her a double whiskey drink
Ice cubes included on a coaster set
The social intercourse a brilliant bet
To greater days ahead the glasses clink
Third person problems every bit inane
I heard out her tale analysed the pain
Chorus inane absurd silly

Revised sonnet #1245

If start of spring the buds endure a gloom

Through woven woodwork lozenges they peep

Above the bay rain clouds concur and loom

I stir a cup of coffee calm I keep

The changing clouds look like lost goats or sheep

Above the harbour harbingers of doom

They blend till lightning torch till thunder boom

Rain drops roll into colonnade they seep

I puff at steam to cool the coffee cup

Youve brought to me my modest little girl

You look lots like your mum you still unfurl

I know youll blossom out and balance up

The green volcano greener nil amiss

Your mum on balcony then blows us kiss

Chorus amiss off wrong

Revised sonnet #1246

Youre right to rail I did what was way wrong
I had to satisfy such selfish needs
Yes very few of my inveigling deeds
Are free of favour sought I slink along
Ill back your drama when you taunt the throng
As queasy opportunity it reads
The loyalty shown to hugs and kisses leads
Id loll in lynch to save you from a pong
Theres nothing which I wouldnt gloss or fake
To stay inside your captivating eyes
Your singsong sayso per se picked the prize
I wonder what else would work wide awake
I kept your place in undulating queue
You chance took other brighter chores to do
Chorus queue file line

Revised sonnet #1247

The womans weathered cruellest run of luck
A mop of red and single silver hair
A bosom bulge of bit uneven pair
A beauty spot thats permanently stuck
A dental arch too full top two teeth buck
A body odour enemy to air
A spectacle enhanced unblinking stare
A monobrow that cops one constant pluck
The womans weathered cruellest run of health
The skin tags harmless harbingers to more
The skating scar a white as white eye sore
The athletes foot invasion struck in stealth
Ive not a name on wiser womens lists
Account of salty language strokes and cysts
Chorus lists indexes tallies

Revised sonnet #1248

The sculptor poured thick paste upon a splint
And fattened under fingers body part
To lifelike leaned the statue bar eye glint
The female corpse in question lacked a heart
A cemetery statue what I wanted mint
I wished to help his hands to create the art
Inhume her heme in everlasting flint
The reaggregated polymer our start
A setting heat and pressure were applied
Of death I had a monumental proof
As people postulated her aloof
The vampire bandage bagged in statue dried
A veil of flint is her immortal meme
A suit of armour mine stops sunshine stream
Chorus meme concept idea

Revised sonnet #1249

Ive sailed two storms in face of foolish fears
Ive weathered whip and surge of waves at worst
The bilge odd ballast ankles mine immersed
As every island fateful first appears
Id like to build a pontoon bridge that rears
A foot above the waves unweather cursed
Twixt isle and land theyre native bush imbursed
A dream it is I hide away from hecklers ears
Sit seaside ruins of Westfield freezing works
There ghosts of natural and gory death
The breeze abbreviates undulating breath
I bob the boat away two rudder jerks
Amongst the mangrove snorkel roots they swim
The snapper which I spear in sport on whim
Chorus swim simma swem

Revised sonnet #1250

Youll say shes slutty her I cede as cheap
She flirts on balcony at steps in foyer
The fellow barber bureaucrat or lawyer
I dawdle by embarrassed damage deep
I like to garner gossip what youd bleep
I like to leer invisible as voyeur
Im drawn to kooky chicks a little coyer
The sort I stumble over half asleep
To hear her heavy breathing forth I jump
I hang on every gurgle groan and gasp
I sometimes feel a sensual servile chump
I sometimes stick in my own virile rasp
A nurse and hard hat hunk or him and her
Through key hole spotted at it as it were
Chorus her haar henne

Revised sonnet #1251

To me she leveled lovingly the clue
As fellows went I matched the brilliant best
In winter garden glasshouse we walked west
Her brother base of envy bet she knew
Their ease of company makes me most blue
And twixt the two Id work a wedge as pest
If chance appeared I might or mightnt jest
I worry why Id fib or bend a view
At margin mired I might turn tactical
You see hes eloquent and elegant
His clever comments come off relevant
His graceful gestures come off practical
Of carvings kissing close I was in awe
In suspect siblings felt I puny flaw
Chorus awe daunt faze

Black holes in sun. Slide between them to parallel universe.