Revised sonnet # 145
The hug I felt asudden spoke of fizz
Arms over shoulders either side of neck
I bobbled body mine against that his
A trusting type I clung I kept in check
I closed eyes confident I neednt squizz
I felt Id follow his exclusive beck
Id read the recipe Id worked out whizz
The previous man accepted olden speck
I heard a subtle heckling little cough
I lost the hug eyes opened own accord
The hint of cosmic karma from the horde
Enough to switch a public pashing off
The sort of love Ive found its fully fair
Ill wish on every soul a place in pair
Chorus fair just reasonable
