Revised sonnet #1464
Her eye shade celebrates a smoke steeped dew
Her ruddy eyes arresting victim seek
Her lips and nails are lacquered black and blue
Her lace up blouse and bloomers capture chic
Her skin is white as white the freckles few
Her cleavage cutaway invites a peek
Her fangs if flaunted savour sweat on brew
I kneel to vampire goddess she unique
Her aim the patient crane out stretching stance
Her knees in pits of arms had found their nest
I watched in wonder stuck in passive zest
Her glad eyes off her nose tip wouldnt glance
Tao massage double d to double e
I stroked her strength though natural and free
Chorus e e e