Revised sonnet #107
True love invites young friends to sacrifice
Themselves to make its compromise ideal
That loving couple hazards keeping nice
In criticism exclusive full on zeal
Ive come to crave the crazy bouncing dice
As laws of luck allude to hunch and feel
And hes accepted fashion vivid vice
As clingy clothes exhibit sex appeal
I handed him a hint of pyrrhic win
Id quit a lot of friends to favour him
I hosted him the only friend of whim
As hed estranged all his I was akin
One holiday I deemed the dude a botch
Upset at wait I tapped the time on watch
Chorus botch flub muff
