Revised sonnet #1479
I love those greyhounds gungho out of gate
And whiskey whirled in coke just over ice
And girls asudden who on shoe heels skate
And Nimrods cup of peopled poker dice
And sharply creased black suits that understate
And stir fried duck in soy sauce set on rice
And dolls reducing dare to one blind date
And nets by sailors mended knot and splice
And parrots who assess by cuss a plus
And earring diamond drops off lobes back pinned
And colonnades that coordinate the wind
And guarantees unasked for never suss
A soul thats crammed is mine I care to dwell
I love you chum that sums up surely well
Chorus dwell abide lodge