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Giacomo (cont.)
Ill tie this pendant noose your wobbling neck
Albin
Please dont obscure the necklace voodoo doll
Of wizard Hector enimigo mine
Silvio
Not much of likeness there to anyone
Your effigys crude we dont care for it
Albin
Then youre my idol highest now on Silvio
Your moustache makes you look distinctly god
Giacomos moustache is a whisker light
He looks the angel perched one rung below
I see the wizard now for what he is
Compared to you hes deadly dull goatee
As tribute Ill steam you shelled hermit crabs
And leave them littered close your midnight snack
Silvio
And has the wicked wizard swindled you?

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Giacomo
Shame you dont have nice little buttons stitched
As fake eyes down the back of your main head
That you might beat a braggarts late retreat
And threaten great harm through ventriloquy
Albin
The wizard stitched in gills against my will
Giacomo
You can have this small pendant silver spoon
As token wage for showing us scenery
A living comfort doll youve been a trove
Of geopositions as far as I see
Albin
The little I know I know very well
The milestones memorised old bumps and scrapes
Afield senors Silvio and Giacomo
Giacomo
Lean forward your revolting triple chin

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Silvio (cont.)
Be entertained and entertaining too
As your chimp stands gorillas avatar
Giacomo
If that big foot fits wear it rule with awe
But you look atom bomb fried none of that
Youre rather boil in bag swell bifida
Silvio
Your small eyes should be sticking out on stalks
You bodybuilder black and white old crab
Unfortunately you buff one foot short
Albin
I feel as if theyve popped from my poor head
I rub them hard and hot in disbelief
Where did I put my fleshy periscopes?
I feel gorilla strong Im feral teased
Silvio
The coke emulsive will sprout you squid like
Man breasts thick masculine hair just you wait

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Albin (cont.)
Is that a mascot painted on the bow?
Giacomo
That mangy coyote dressed in sombrero
And poncho giving finger sticks our charm
I dont know if you can see it from there
Red letters loudly say Chupacabra
The maiden name once was El Mosquito
Rechristened it brings sailors real bad luck
Silvio
Do you enjoy your coke tequila neat?
Albin
One more for the screwy bumpy road ahead
Id like to pretty much remain this high
Silvio
Si take a short cut skip down our food chain
Time travel is as natural as can

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Albin
I heard the beast beach screeching I thought best
To cringe aloof and let it suffocate
On puffs of gentle breeze else just bleed out
A submarine of sorts did you disclose?
Looks like a harmless whale shark if observed
From mounted lava lumps an able hand
At my brow shading my divergent eyes
Silvio
What wretched fortune that we tempted fate
Exalted hubris hit sour marinade
We had a female hostage stashed aboard
We whistled right wing party jingles shrill
The vessel was rechristened needlessly
Giacomo
Si bad luck has crashed down on swollen heads

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Giacomo
Hes admiral and don Silvio aboard
La Chupacabra on yon sandbar beached
A narco sub the shell thick fibreglass
Im pilot and capo Giacomo there
Albin
Then by your soldiers medals youre both sunk
As burglary and fencing arent divine
Silvio
Youve read far too much into our conceit
The medals are mere army surplus spoils
Pinned on our chests our feet firm on the ground
Albin
Say if my handles killer whale smudge yours
Silvio
Hes known as Butterfingers mecha shanked
Im known as Cosh account of pistol whips

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Silvio (cont.)
Spit it out else Ill pistol whip your ear
Again with feeling proxy lightning bolts
Albin
Im Albin offspring challenged since bad luck
Sole spawn of mummy mambo Talala
The wizards partner far as goes estate
I bluffed your names my ear to yellow sand
What avatars might you exhibit through?
Silvio
Our patsies are by prior arrangement hired
Youd have to sign a non disclosure clause
We travel cognito in limousines
Albin I dub you Orca since youre pied
Albin
What might I call you two sweat twinkling pals?

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Angela (cont.)
Inside that pressure chamber spell book draped
Across his face and known by him alone
Its best for both sakes safety not said where
Felix
You have a demigods strength can I trust
You not to mangle me if we embrace?
Angela
My bones have been designed to shatter first
To harm no human being offensively
Infra red steeps my aura mannerisms
So early warning is systemic dear
Felix
Its going to be fun learning your sweet ways
Hector
We grow old but some things will never change
Young people ever more seek out good times
Act 3 Scene 2
Silvio
I didnt quite catch your name senor freak

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Angela (cont.)
Superior compromised duress refined
Symbiosis has proved his true destiny
One level under demigod claimed his
He gives indentured praise in chants for much
With triplicate claps engines whizz and whirr
He lowers thick curved glass lids on his prone self
From cantilever pulleys straight above
With spelling spokes in either practised hand
More strings lift counterweights in parallel
The hissing hinges smoothly seal then lock
The hypnomeditative chamber couch
Felix
And do you know what time he finishes
His arcane hypnomeditations then?
Angela
The times are variable as he lies prone

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Angela (cont.)
Behaves as if a flexing solar skin
Felix
Ive got an inkling that hes made great use
Of personal catastrophe and turned
It genuinely constructive beaten odds
Angela
By word of mouth through Albin bifida
He found our Hector lying near comatose
Lagoon side on the pebble strand wave lapped
And practised there resuscitation straight
Felix
A savage ministering mouth to mouth
The kiss of life instinctive I would guess
Angela
The wizard traumatised by tentacles
Of jellyfish stung comatose once now
Hosts plankton photosynthesis enhanced

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Angela (cont.)
Included late diagnosis tumours missed
Im his substantive mourning monument
As hes since found a tropical sea sponge
A common phyllus ancient which can yield
A watered down efficient toxic cure
Felix
Thus Hectors machinations visited
On Angelas proud shoulders but come hold
My calloused hands a minute smile your smile
Angela
Come kiss fine gills on my throat such as these
The wizard will implant you one day soon
Hes generous to those who earn respect
My widower once removed eats sunlight neat
Ingests nought else since his symbiotic skin

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Felix (cont.)
Im saddle sore from polo pony rides
And after party drinking games add worse
Lower abdomen aches all from time to time
Might my poor gametes flounder gormlessly?
Are there not far too many children live
Already crowding this far too small world?
Id rather yield my heart should one sweet girl
Cause me to laugh intentionally strange
And keep me company enjoying down time
And mind me through injury through disease
Id perch her pretty much on pedestal
Angela
The wizards wife bore not a single child
They didnt lay much providential store
By their misfortune but the double blow

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Felix
Tell me is this a lucky break or what?
A castaway engaging his cast off
Remember when the wizard made me freeze
By waving wands I felt it was as much
The swift result of glimpsing suddenly
Your beautiful self strutting close by him
You do pull off the skimpiest bikini
Angela
You have amazing sparkling eyes Felix
I cant bear children but consider me
Available to your brood down the track
Book me in their loyal nanny evermore
To point of rending pacifier dry nurse
Adjustable sewing dummy one side rolled
Felix
Well Im not sure I can sire anyone

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Felix (cont.)
His thinking surely bent on better worlds
Where peace and kindness are in swabs conveyed
Extreme behaviours are blocked docked and quashed
Angela
Indeed bipolar activities are
Discouraged from this island microcosm
Felix
Would that the wicked world could learn to love
Amnesia fresh off fashionable clothes
And not recycle wars for decades more
As battles borderline as retro chic
Angela
The wizard self confessed has run against
His innermost beliefs from student days
Toiled through industrial laboratories
Pained he believes in shallowness of late

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Angela (cont.)
I am her likeness from her carefree youth
A living breathing statue replica
Of his misread deceased beloved wife
Presented nicely lit and airbrushed smooth
The surgeons scalpel sculptings subtly struck
And factored her look signature enhanced
And further honoring her memory
Knowing she would only want his sense of grief
To last one year and one day he has shaped
Another beauty his near future bride
That sweet bio robot is so much of me
Except the freckles round her fine nose bridge
Her luscious nape length red and curly hair
Her old predilection swimsuits one piece
Felix
The wizard has left his great grief with you
His factory line visionary looks

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Felix
Youre just saying that to flatter foolish me
Angela
No Im quite serious dont gauge irony
Know since the moment I clapped eyes on you
I thought delighted what a handsome boy
That something simple stirred up sympathy
Felix
You are the prettiest girl Ive ever seen
It spoils my chances of finding love first sight
I could bide what you see is what you get
The wizard is a lucky fellow wed
To such a charming beautiful slim girl
Angela
But were not man and wife your guess is wrong
He kept a photograph of his late wife
A lock of her fair hair too watertight
In his gold locket constant memory

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Felix (cont.)
Have left me cold Ive never been enthused
About returning calls the morning next
I sense youre different that youd let me
Complete a sentence though predictable
And if by some chance bored with me you would
Just cup a hand on your mouth going to yawn
You would change subject not the boy in play
Angela
But I could never find you boring dear
Youre my first sentient living being apart
From Hector who is self appointed boss
Of all things coral island demigod
In making yet I cant help but love you
Your finest gestures deeds and mannerisms
Infatuate me deep within resonate

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Felix (cont.)
Before this not a bunion nothing more
Angela
Ive got a little number youll just love
A tight mid thigh dress I myself ran up
On overlockers tailors dummies gauged
It has slits down the sides the cleavage too
Inspired by reference to driving gloves
In kid glove leatherette I kid you not
Felix
Youd look divine against the bonnet posed
I own at least one such performance car
Your sports bra baseball cap and cycle pants
As of these last few hours are quite enough
Ive been on entertaining one night stands
With many beauties through the past few years
But their poor manners their entitled airs

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Felix (cont.)
Cant have you looking musclebound and boyish
Angela
But you forget Im bio robot in race
I dont ooze out of organs oestrogen
Felix
I lost my concentration say you do
Smell wonderful your perfect good looks passed
Angela
I sweat a scent called Arctic Meadow Pure
A fantasy bouquet of alpine flowers
Drawn from seeds trapped in our dear wizards socks
Felix
You make bench presses look so effortless
I absolutely struggled pinned that weight
The budding callouses on my palms hurt
Youre better off if never feeling that
I had a twitch in my gas pedal foot

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Angela
You could negotiate lesser ripped physique
Done over just a fortnight hard arse lite
My kind of young athletic gentleman
Felix
Hairsplitting definitions arent for me
Amino acids mixed with vitamins
If steroids if not simply arent for me
Angela
I can assure you my dear your flask holds
Pure water nothing else the wizard grows
Immortal tissues spread in such a fluid
He knows all loopholes blindspots bottlenecks
Which hinder us dont worry one small thing
Look if it can make you feel more at home
Ill finish your bench presses round them out
Felix
Thanks but no thanks doll Ill complete my bit

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Angela (cont.)
A starfish limb now cleaves upon a crunch
Moray eels pull down their morsel taken
Where limbs grow whole new starfish on a hunch
Pantry stashed meat Neptune has forsaken
Seems like a nomansland this undertow
Here kelp and coral cue its plankton flow
Act 3 Scene 1
Felix
Im sick of pumping iron and changing weights
And strolling treadmill belt each milestone clocked
The body building it just isnt me
I like to party hard frequent night clubs
Then come back up for air playing video games
He mentioned thirty days as all Id need
On this crash course to upgrade muscleman

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Silvio
Obsequious blimp come tour guide shuttle forth
Albin (chants)
The atoll bursts with ripe sexbots
I weave one way hemp lobster pots
No hazed child soldier poor Albin
On bombshell such I pull a pin
So long sour Hector golly gee
Me human traffickers loose free
Angela (chants)
Where kelp and coral arbitrate their truce
A small black cleaner wrasse finds it no harm
To groom a gropers sore throat uses charm
To peck out parasites leave his client spruce
A damsel fish grinds coral format loose
He grows sweet algae on his ocean farm
Defends his turf with surly squatter qualm
The algae render ambient sunlight juice

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Albin (cont.)
Senor Giacomo angel just divine
I kiss your freedom fighter feet thank you
Senor Silvio good god I huff and buff
Your obsidian and black pearl pinky ring
I can blow kiss dull treadmill now byebye
I may quit uptight wizard Hector si
Now I say adios no more tough work outs
Si let me be your iodine doped sea salt
A common sense infused lagoon tour guide
Ill show you where exactly you can reap
A sea weed meadow using oyster shells
And how to hemp net red crabs who relax
In coconut tree fronds and where to dip
Your coconut half shell for water strained
Impurity free by soft coral combs

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Albin (cont.)
Firewater makes me whirling giddy glad
Giacomo
A cargo cult will do for now wont it?
Silvio
Si two steps forward and then one step back
Im his god while youre his conquistador
Standovers shakedowns skims protection rorts
And money laundering our roots and bulbs
Would draw a blank with ignoramus here
Giacomo
French kiss the thick glass flask and funnel out
A rolled drop bifida blob muscleman
Albin
Youre twisting my arm therefore I submit
To supernatural incendiary
Who dominate the wizards signs and spells
And my inferior hobby santeria

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Albin (cont.)
The victory put you off your back flip
Is your green throat tattoo the latest word
In chipset interface for white space suits?
The baby face with two bare skin stripes shaved
Through his right eyebrow on the fullest moon
Is he your baby picture blown right up?
Silvio
No on reflection Im the cardinal
Weighed down by his white mitre mooning man
My nose agreeing to meet my chin at last
Albin
Time traveller starman and astronaut
I worship searing sand you shuffle on
And lukewarm murky mud you slither through
All you see come low tide belongs to me
At your disposal lies quilt like rolled back

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Albin
Tattoos inked on your knuckles don Silvio?
Your hands are always moving I cant read
Silvio
Look closer zoom in what does my fist say?
Albin
Your left fist says hate I just see that now
Silvio
Its my right fist you see on your left side
It says love not hate you sad knucklehead
Take this take that hate is a form of love
Albin
I think I saw you once entirely framed
By sea grapes driftwood and anenomes
A blotted portrait if not copybook
My fishnet bag though was already stuffed
I left your image meditating much
You shook off trash talk you bounced round the moon

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Giacomo
There wont be wiggle room in bartering
With coastguard captains goods for services
Silvio
I cut and built a box of pumice blocks
With flick knife knuckleduster cosh and noose
A makeshift chilly bin below the mark
For low tide it holds safe and cool immersed
Two coke tequila sealed flasks which beat odds
Albin
So you say old space junk I worship you
For not eliminating me on sight
Silvio
The bilious bifida comes back to life
Know me a cosmonaut on reentry bent
Giacomo
An astronaut who exits stratosphere
Silvio
Splash coke tequila down both your fat gobs

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Giacomo (cont.)
Her shoddy diesel engine gaskets fixed
Or rather healed by magical technique
Attested by grease monkey Dino si
Theres not a shard of broken glass aboard
No sealed flasks line the pristine wooden crates
No sign of coke tequila met the eye
I guess drained down propeller shafts and lost
On lobsters gropers krill clouds and the like
Whose primal jitters can be scarcely sussed
Weve hit lowest point of low tide I believe
And life is on the up well catch high tide
And slip away first sunset onset thrilled
Silvio
Our precious cargo ballast burley flushed
Away in clouds to nourish schools of fish

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Silvio (cont.)
Eyes saw your head go under cresting waves
Thrice capo Giacomo why that sour note?
Are you not likewise joyed to see me live?
Giacomo
Don Silvio a skin cancer doesnt care
For green ink prison tattoos mine are safe
In two hole poncho pilot whale grey pelt
Silvio
And I think melanoma luxury
This present crisis needs quick remedy
Do you have news of our Chupacabra?
Giacomo
The low tide having ebbed its nadir niche
The narco sub is perched shes still one piece
Seesaw beached on a coral island reef
As if in provident dry dock entrenched

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Albin (cont.)
The little matchstick merchant ship in tow
Its sails and masts on hinges corked his gob
But I prefer a kava homebrew drop
Sipped leisurely from coconut half shells
Silvio
But coke tequila kills your loose hook worms
Firewater by proof hospital grade juice
Another shot depopulates the bowel
Of parasites leaves flora legless too
Your body is a temple when preyed on
Let me dose your red tonsils from the flask
Youll never rasp from streptococcus more
Giacomo
You cut that racket siesta still in play
Silvio
I know that voice not for a minute did
I think you drowned though my salt burnt foam blurred

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Silvio (cont.)
Theres one for pure lip service one to chow
And garble simultaneously raw clams
And one that can parp gas and bragging rights
What you need is a coke tequila shot
Suck this flask salvaged from my submarine
Old chum or Ill tear you a bunghole new
Albin
I celebrate you taking me aboard
Your albatross like top shelf buzzard wing
Forgive me my diminished twin senor
As hes a shrinking violet nods and shakes
Silvio
More coke tequila then for me his god
The overbitten shrunken knucklehead
Should see a shrink to see whats eating him
Albin
He sucked a nearly empty bottle once
And strained a mayday note firewater loose

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Silvio
The Jonah! Am I mad or did I hear
This skin and bones cetacean speak just now
Colloquial gringo? are the floppy arms
And legs extremities of starfish gob
Unprobed by ocean biologists thus far?
Ill pull its bloody overboiled red leg
It can grow yet another give a damn
I make of it asparagus spear roll
Enormity Id lay it flush across
A magical red carpet down one flight
And flog it rolled to some wild nephew heir
Attached to wealthy sultans cash and stock
On deals like that your feet dont touch the ground
Albin
Tsk tsk tsk me oh my cough cough tut tut
Silvio
The beast has three crap holes it mumbles out

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Giacomo (cont.)
Poor thing abstracted suicide its response
From memes about the way the world is stuffed
Shall we share siesta under whale sail shade
Till angry sun sheathes his white javelins
And pockets scaly melanomas spare?
The shrimp the shark they cuddle crack of doom
Albin
I didnt hear a thing if you ask me
Silvio
Im frying in my own skin and my lips burn
The pilot whale abandoned skeleton
Not one scrap doggie bagged from barbecue?
Vestigial hands and feet unglossed with gloves
Fins once upon a u turn skid road kill
Giacomo
Amigo take a break please from yourself

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Giacomo (chant cont.)
To Maggie Margaret or Peg
A sea sick shanty that is to call foul
The mutability of maiden names
Ill blot it out with coke tequila shots
(Chants)
He lay beneath a merchant flag
His coffin sank at once no snag
Backwater shanty town thats shanty flogged
Republic banana reflagged relaunched
Theres no escape from morbid facts of life
For anyone wake up your sorry self
Two headed giant king crab hot nuclear waste
They boast King Tut commands cash registers
Yet fellows like this get no money hushed
Albin
Nobody home come back soon tsk tsk tsk
Giacomo
A brilliant echo bouncing down whale skull

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Albin (cont.)
It lacks for nought and combs for gizzard stones
Ill wrap this hide of pilot whale around
My shoulders snug this suicide sized main sail
The fishnet bag of coconuts cecede
Giacomo
Is there no end to this pink griddle plate?
Im dying for shelter from the scorching sun
Ill kneel and wash away my steaming sweat
From burning eyes in this low tide rock pool
Is heat stroke making me delusional?
A pilot whale beached skeleton picked clean
Lying on a windowdressing bed of kelp?
(Chants)
The pilot captain their first mate
Banged Cathy Katey then a Kate
Gave not so much as stroke of leg

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Miguel
Its back to front a blunt effrontery
Act 2 Scene 2
Albin
The wizard wont give me preventative
Elixirs at all on that point we part
So Ill get back at him via peeping toms
Loyal ghosts of voodoo gods the specialist
In mischief sort contract retribution
Im done with curatives done for the sprains
The fevered flus the jogging stitch and cramps
My head throbbed stinging pains from jellyfish
Assault when last I lowered forth lobster pots
The wizard should shove his hindsight up his
But whos this coming up the pebble beach?
Id better lurk curled play the possum plumb
Some creature wandering up our food chain

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Plasma (chant cont.)
Awake from harsh tunes fixed to troubled brains
Salvatore
My poor ears ache ball bearings rumble them
Paolo
The grinding gear noise was unbearable
Gianni
This screeching loud conveyor belt lets get off
Gloria
I settled into nightmare typical
Recurring weird improbabilities
Where pleasant people act so oddly rude
And bullies sugar endless flattery
My daydream nap then filled with big cat roars
Like those Id heard in zoos and which I guessed
To be the sabre tooths then mammoth toots
Blared largely elephantine that I sussed
Eduardo
Who would believe us? how could such things be?

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Paolo
Ive got a strong gut feeling rescue is
On its way coastguard helicopter search
Gianni
The vocal grandiose Miguel is to blame
For plunging us in crisis we should pass
Our shadows on his eyelids thus enact
A gallery of cameos hovering
Hed wake and die of sudden heart attack
Salvatore
A natural death coroners report
Plasma
I must save these folk from their wreckless youths
Its cool off time for overheated minds
Ill hum them humoured hint a healing hymn
(Chants)
Arise from dreams and nightmares deepest sleep
If your lives were prized they are wont to keep
For such as you in stealth are too quick slain

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Salvatore
Push shove well be each other alibid
Gianni
Si well survive catastrophe move forth
Ill emulate your sabotage in scale
Though humbler are the inner city bounds
You know my uncle mayor in nepotism
Indolent bureaucrats found internship
For me curating town hall documents
Ill blot erase and shred some toxic chits
Salvatore
If we escape from this giant pickle jar
We three should start a little business
With ethics tap a niche which is crying out
Poor folk with rotten teeth who cant afford
Rich dentists we should supply our clientele
With meth as a meth mouth means nought to them

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Salvatore (cont.)
A snore free siesta quality down time
A pumice stone induced deep coma si?
Gianni
Hey Paolo hand me that swiss army knife
All three of them can bleed out gradually
To pass away in deadly dull daydreams
Paolo
Gianni youre being too rash irrational
Keep your voice down please till a real plan gels
A senora slain is unthinkable
Salvatore
Reluctantly I must agree with you
The vagaries of providence can bring
Forth unprovoked misdeeds especially
Here we have Gloria and Eduardo plain
Theyre Miguels pals elite collateral
If negligent manslaughters sign the way
In them we have two patsies platter laid

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Paolo (cont.)
As long as his own salary is safe
The fiscal chest is siesta crimping stuff
May I join your rebellious club of pals?
Gianni
Si as youve sworn the governor a crook
Salvatore
Hes all for snoring not for snorting coke
Sleep walking long drops outhouse oriented
Entitled toff that he is steered by genes
Im all for stomping down three days three nights
Going sleepless native through rainforest thick
Chewing on guarana berries coca leaves
And stevia stalks in guerrilla war mode
Hes all for twiddling thumbs not fingers twitched
For pinched espresso cups the pinky out
Lets give this lily palmed state governor

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Salvatore (cont.)
Waves from his bullet proof plush limousine
Election day come whisks past ballot booths
With gentle toots his driver blows plebs off
And so leaves young turks such as I to do
The legwork canvas votes and brainwash well
Smirk party propaganda into being
Gianni
Were grass roots theyre dead wood true Salvatore
The narco sub wreck has now crystallised
My hate for mayor and uncle Eduardo
Salvatore
He licks my uncle Miguels boots for loot
I deputise you Gianni fight red tape
Paolo
Governor Miguel can turn his blind eye
On things of massive public interest

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Salvatore (cont.)
The fine white bum fluff number one goatee
The whining what you see is what you get
The pail of ancient axioms what of her?
Gianni
Mayor Eduardo too sad clown nodding si
Invisible except for his brown nose
Hed lighten our predicament found dead
A casualty of falling coconuts
Salvatore
She has the presidents ear which is deaf
Whereas I secretly emend state laws
To moderate the lot of peasantry
False bottom black organic heroin paid
When local body payroll cant be met
Shes boldfaced highlights where Im whitening
She fawns her pawn the governor Miguel
That stiff snob long removed from civvy street

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Eduardo (cont.)
Lets spend a siesta shaded there by rocks
Observing civilisation lures it
Gloria
A hard bed makes for backbone straight and true
Miguel
You lively young men forage us a lunch
Salvatore
Did you hear that old pompous motor mouth?
I could leap right in bare hands throttle him
Gianni
Id be surprised now if he didnt snore
The other clowns in chorus would approve
Salvatore
With him rolled out of way wed be reinforced
A death by misadventure on his card
His enemigos ever jostling him
The narco cartel bosses would think twice
But Gloria his stern scrapbook counsellor

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Gianni (cont.)
If cocked may be profoundly scrutinised
Tax credits claimed on subdivided land
May come to haunt her shell be less amused
Miguel
Compared to what tarts were available
To him then she looked angel heaven sent
The lucky billionaire industrialist
I think I know him from the consulate
Gloria
I wept on seeing the bridal gown and veil
Of cream and white and Dee was beautiful
The pages children dressed in suits and gowns
Left me quite breathless they were so darned cute
Eduardo
Dear Gloria I was told the girl who caught
The posy was a relative of yours
I must acquaint her with my boy some time

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Miguel (cont.)
The champion dancer northern hemisphere
The ten pin bowling bright new shooting star
I cant believe my son is still alive
But I take your word gospel otherwise
Id crash asleep and never wake again
Salvatore
My limbs are weary from our sea ordeal
Relaxed to point of withering away
Our Dee has been resilient Ive no doubt
Shes finished her reception mind intact
Tomorrow on her racecourse honeymoon
While ten detectives scour the kidnap scene
Shell calibrate her workaholic groom
So take the edge off our glaring gloom
Gianni
As shes societys yardstick now on notched
Beneath a magnifying glass she yet snooks

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Paolo (cont.)
While I trod water Silvio and Felix
Swam strongly different directions veered
Combatted undertow with furious strokes
As bookends scaled a steep soaked pebble beach
Myself I threw a sidestroke then a backstroke
A dogpaddle at it whatever would
Manoeuvre me beyond stroppy elements
I gulped air my heart beat in my feint head
Miguel
This is the special price of vanity
I saw her list of fine invited guests
I was intrigued and flattered totally
Elite peers draughted worthy company
The shipping magnates who came up from scratch
The multiple award burdened physicists
The beautiful society hostesses
And their impeccably fresh debutantes
The exiled military dictators

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Salvatore
What were you thinking when you savaged us?
Miguel
I good as tacked a bullseye on his back
Though he refused to wear a tuxedo
Ive much as murdered my poor darling son
By squeezing that showy wedding into blanks
Of our official black appointment book
Paolo
No Miguel your boys pretty much alive
I saw him scramble over sharp edged crags
Of coral on a lucky sudden swell
Miguel
But I tell you the fourth time I thrust up
Above waves my soaked head I saw my son
And Silvio fighting foaming thick wave crests
Paolo
From my perspective I assure you folk

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Miguel (cont.)
My one and only Felix my sweet boy
We shouldve passed on Dees big wedding day
Deemed its locale a too exotic fare
Salvatore
Senor Miguel so now what do you think
Of our brine powdered dry white skin tight suits?
Miguel
I think theyre wonderfully up to date
I couldnt see it as a fashion trend
You look as if you were poured into them
Forgive me please for being a fussy ponce
For that hypocrisy dealt on my part
Me wearing this gold earring all the while
A fancied merchant navy chest tattoo
Yet mocking you young fellows kitted out
With nose studs eyebrow pins and nipple rings

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Paolo (cont.)
From gaping clams or mussels shell sharp edge
Miguel
Si rips and scratches are the perfect crime
They were prepared to ask for piles of cash
As ransom not kill us on coke high whim
That much I give to those ambitious thugs
Don Silvio and his capo Giacomo
Eduardo
I can assure you theyve been more than once
Around the block in tinted windows framed
Salvatore
The captain capo used a sliding scale
Of ransom fees to arbitrate whos who
He got our hostage valuations bang on
In my opinion he wont just leave off
Miguel
Has anyone seen my son? has he drowned?

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Paolo
I nod and tick you whats in it for me?
Salvatore
A raft of newly minted medals could
Be pinned on your chest reward for services
A time in future marked of benefit
Paolo
Then I shall guard these isles against my foe
A civilisation lost far advanced
Its remnant aliens may inhabit caves
And wells and hollows under our bare feet
What guy fawkes like pranks lie in stall for us?
Gianni
Lead us as rearguard shunt us narrow filed
A moving target versus vicious foe
Miguel
Praise heavens there are more of us alive
Paolo
You look as if youve had a rushed close shave

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Gianni
But for phlegmatic coughs inflecting laughs
Which sign him sea sick now Id slap his head
Salvatore
I took in water near drowned but the sun
Is steaming my lungs dry take heart from me
Paolo
I feel so tired as if my body has
Burnt off some muscle that I might survive
Gianni
We must remain alert and slink along
I sense a savage magic circles us
This neck of coral reef the zombies wade
Theyre stiff as small dolls gift shop souvenired
Im sure premonition seeks out my eyes
Salvatore
Ive had a vision featuring you propped
The puppet statesman mouthpiece whom I use

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Salvatore
Punch drunk I look to land a lucky punch
On whoevers handy its a charming flaw
As goddess Venus plumped is my wet nurse
The dowry good as alimony banked
We chimps now follow up the money trail
Nod any vocal old degenerate
Theft sodomy and murder are in style
Paolo
As Im the only one who knows first aid
The bonobono good samaritan
I urge you alpha chimps to moderate
Your attitudes and think of who cleans up
You ape your peers loud alpha macho men
Who lose their wallets drunk crib taxis home
And so forth it starts looking less than fun
Salvatore
But no one makes you tag along Paolo

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Paolo (cont.)
Hemp woven your teeth pirate eyepatch blacked
Gianni
Do tell me is the coral snippet here
Beneath an equal opportunity?
Salvatore
Why mortgages now double right across
The board to make chicks who work feel at home
Each pumice block and lava lump the gem
Did their mums ever live down right of way?
Gianni
You make me laugh philosophical chimp
Not as much as when booze is on the house
At crystal punchbowls posed you pack a punch
You pick a fight with any fruity gent
To catch the eye of dishy debutantes

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Salvatore
Theres hardly anyone here few enough
To form a quorum bossed democracy
An all inclusive gang made crystalline
Thus any crony nominated odd
Might humbly deputise at any time
As prison warden copper or marine
Press into serving well community
Dealt handcuffs batons guns and pepper spray
What paradise where people live for love
Where marriage common law decides the bride
Defers to short straws drawn and dice cubes rolled
Gianni
It should be hydroponically fed
And decked with poppy hemp and coca plants
A dreamy picture postcard paradise
Paolo
Your medicine chest opium laced your smalls

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Gianni
So here we are sunk luckily alive
Well sweat by day and freeze in sweat by night
Salvatore
The coral island were now standing on
Is ripped like sculpted abs or pecs or glutes
Its lean and hard like any muscleman
Gianni
If less is more Id rather hump the reef
Quench lady body builder her tight clam
I think her shaped lagoon millstone lifebouy
For petrified young castaways a mount
Paolo
Id gladly take back home the island salt
On my breast pocket starch thick honours badge
Of braille outline of cigarette steel case
To fob my papas ball and chain a stitch
A yoyo yarn which yanks a fall and rise

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Gianni
Since her kings ransom wedding do were we
Not kidnapped just a bit too easily?
Is not our Dee conspicuously not here?
Salvatore
Why didnt she do well for her cute self
In marrying sideways skewed a billionaire
Industrialist her mother background checked?
Paolo
There we were guests at her huge opulent
Reception itemising tuxedos
And evening gowns and tippling bubbly wine
Our formalised concession being cravats
When boom we were coshed herded roughly gagged
By gangsters their heads balaclava clad
Rest catering firm uniform disguised

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Salvatore
Soon well be sundried flaky tomatoes
In our own sweat cooked no preservatives
Gianni
Its blindingly clear weve got nought to do
Else but directly stare at blazing sun
Paolo
Our clothes embrace our bodies theyre sewn on
Gianni
Tight as a homosexuals just as wet
The cheeks invite the eyes like it or not
Paolo
I know the faghag heiress socialite
Dee very well from summer holidays
Intentional hurt is not her cruel vice
Shes joyous and generous and slightly naive
Salvatore
Since when was Dee a dildo visited?

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Paolo
You cant hear your watch tick for crashing waves
Salvatore
Poor Paolo had his whole grand life mapped out
The diary down to seconds organised
Paolo
Two kitchen garden seagrass fathoms call
I could eat this salt peppered paradise
Salvatore
Look theres a horrid shadow passing through
A hammerhead shark prowling I would think
The knuckleheads sharp teeth and gristle else
No clouds in yon sky which is blue as blue
Joined seamlessly horizon free to sea
Paolo
Were promised rapid squat tsunami waves
As karmic payback due to shallowest lives

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Paolo (cont.)
Catastrophes occur from time to time
Folk get through bad stuff end the stronger souls
Our submarine wreck unexceptional
Insurance sales staff paramedics writhe
Mortality in annual quota met
Where coastguard helicopters buzz intent
So count your blessings that youre still alive
Gianni
The little pep talks plainly overcooked
Salvatore
Crisp barbecue kebab hot air slow spin
Gianni
Hes chirpier than a wooden cuckoos clock
Salvatore
Theres spring in his hop time for his last tweet
Gianni
Hes clocked in but to swab the landscape blot
Salvatore
He stuck his neck out ever sticky beak

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Angela chants (cont.)
It hurt me horrid you would surely think
Brain haemorrhage poor man some kind of clot
Of blood in his wise head a blown nerve link
I shied away from him and then got shot
Of his ingenious presence charming wink
In my wrecked ship the hammock loop and knot
I pluck a fan and sponges green and pink
The silversides and sardines swerve and roll
And a school of silver tarpon hurtles
And at them near flap forth two green turtles
On quarterdeck four crimson lobsters stroll
Moray eels love mad whove struck a jiggle
Green heart groove in grit it gets a giggle
Act 2 Scene 1
Paolo
Hey Gianni wise up now and quit your sighing

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Plasma (cont.)
Lit up by dodgy deep sea angler fish
Bioluminescent compadres near swish
As deeds of darkness dont address one day
The hidden heart cant ever drive away
Hector
And yet I yearn for my home town at times
Plasma chants
On iron sand plonk your bare foot soles
Imprint no heel and ball deep holes
Waves flatten foam out lose their strength
Walk your unleashed greyhounds at length
The fighting bantam crows cheep cheep
And rainchecks fresh chicks from his coop
The fighting pit bull yelps woof woof
And rainchecks fresh pups from his troupe
Angela chants
The wizard called me stupid blinkered bot

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Felix (cont.)
Kidnappers stuck in foolish argument
But wait a minute I know your face now
Wizard youre that distinguished scientist who
Went missing eight years past the daily rags
Got lots of mileage from your vanishing
Hector
In spirit I died earlier when my wife
Was diagnosed too late I felt helplessness
Now Angela was built in likeness true
And her kind will be plugged to equalise
Wherever women are outnumbered lots
And misery attends sterility
Angela
Its what she wouldve wanted she knew best
Plasma chants
One knot down stands your capo statue stiff
By lead belt weighted down as if no tiff

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Hector (cont.)
For this wrecked submarine disheveled man
And simultaneously he strongly feels
A desperate void filled and not true love
Angela
Then it is love at first sight is it not?
Felix
If you say its enthralling I desire
More oxytocin less adrenalin
Hector
Kick me the weapon grab humanity
Place your head with ours up the giant head sac
And we shall go for one pleasant flight
In this innocuous jetpack jellyfish
Calamity casts me the chaperone
Felix
It skipped to me on swing of narco sub

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Plasma (cont.)
Inelegant and blubber proud
Felix
The last dirge was entirely bittersweet
My godfather was accident prone just
Until mysteriously he passed away
To me he wasnt anything but old
Hector
Intruder freeze drop down on sand your gun
Do not encourage me to wave the wands
Angela
Dear he looks smaller skinnier met up close
Than scaled to life projections have allowed
Are you sure handsome he embodies threats?
Hector
Forbidden is that lane of ignorance
You are a prototype  of bio robot
The benchmark mould for many many more
I must dissect your basic motive dear
You feel enormous pity not true love

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Hector (cont.)
I thank you Albin from huge depths of heart
And also providence whatever powers
Perhaps Atlantean guide my sacred scrolls
Act 1 Scene 4
Felix
I wonder where might that ethereal tune
Originate? If I veer left to right
Or right to left the pitch drops down to nought
My ear drums pop so painfully to goad
Me back on course two steps on one step back
Plasma chants
As mist glowing on the sparkling brine
The nanobots spy cutting fine
As parasol they circle one
So guard the wizard from the sun
Glass flasks are frosted by wave foam
Glass shards are blunted by wet loam
The elephant seal barks out loud

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Albin (cont.)
Said twice and so want nought imagined else
I found you washed ashore one sunny day
As I combed beach the steeper reach of  strand
And circled anxiously till my calves ached
Tired I sat down on your chest to make a plan
At which a jellyfish popped from your mouth
And groans foamed out around your lips and teeth
I bound in shards of coral naked bones
With tattered old hemp fishing net pulled tight
Hector
That makeshift chalk shin cast for castaway
Dissolved and wed with my bare flesh and bone
As coral creatures phytoplankton loosed
Inside my tissues green luminescence

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Hector (cont.)
She was mere arms and torso victim still
Your evil deed seen by spy nanobots
Albin
So which of these great beauties is she now?
Is she the bob the pigtails or the curls?
Hector
All beauties look alike and theyre alike
If you love symmetries as you love chaos
Her mystery is not available
Remember my old vow that Id restore
Your gentle diminished fraternal twin
Contingent on a good behaviour bond?
Albin
As you are some mosaic twin genes professed
That morsel is not true hypocrisy
Small thanks for saving your wretched life then
Meantime Ive grown accustomed love my lot

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Albin (cont.)
Raised ocean levels inch high round the reefs
I want to renegotiate treaty terms
An inch above the low tide marks which ring
The coral island move with modern times
Hector
Well talk when you complete the punishment
Till youve clocked seven thousand hours hard slog
Community based service treadmill trapped
Your sentence served my ears are deaf to pleas
Albin
I was not caught in flagrante delicto
Hector
The felony of vandalism was judged
Concurrent evidence of circumstance
You smashed glass chamber number three to bits
Yourself thrust on the young unfinished clone
Both wholly drenched in green amniotic fluids

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Hector (cont.)
How far with opportunity weve come
Albin
Sweet Angela my small organic patch
Has only been blessed by your presence once
Angela
Your easy going free range sea gull coop stinks
My eyes cant bear the sight of chick wings clipped
This time no thanks to your foul boiled chewing gum
My inner being mysteriously recoils
Albin
Youre such a fuss with foodstuffs Angela
Angela
In truth I only eat to be polite
Well I must leave you now for beauty sleep
Recharge of batteries depleted here
Albin
Wizard Hector as global warming has

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Hector
Hes taking punishment all you need know
We need such vulgar puffed up entities
To test the bounds of our humanity
Define like framework neatly who we are
Albin
The gymnasium is tortuous punishment
When digging holes then filling them again
Is real mens work my carbon footprint small
Hector
Our last collaboration garden cove
Of hardy plants still thrives I trust Albin
Albin
Green is the only colour natural
To wild tomatoes carrots beans and peas
Hector
Tornadoes mainland sowed the stratosphere
Dropped our wild beachcombing eight treasured seeds

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Plasma (cont.)
Round me if I woke countless moons ago
The world and moon were caught in civil war
Hector
I guessed you some spark off the old starman
Plasma
Stir crazy over aeons trapped I cant whinge
But wizard I do many chores as thanks
For your hard reality and waking dream
Hector
Go reconnoitre castaways again
How is our feral pal doing treading mill?
Angela
I dont like him much he gives idiot looks
Hector
You never liked his bulbous ugly looks
And now we see hes much more ugly due
To bodybuilding protein shakes and sweat
Angela
Theres something youre not telling me wizard

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Plasma (cont.)
Alls ship shape sorted fresh come next high tide
Hector
Plasma youve grown indispensable here
And yet a day comes soon that we shall part
I feel it bode in my bones truthfully
Remember how I heard your moans and groans
From within that soft tufa slab and chipped
You loose and took care not to damage you
As if a sculptor safety margin inch
Plasma
I was from long incarceration freed
By you and this inch thick glass suits me flexed
The perfect weave of luck and legacy
Volcanic lava flowed abruptly hot

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Hector (cont.)
My hearty will squirm out of sailors knots
Three days adrift inside the treacherous
Sargasso seas of  Bermuda triangle
Enough hard tack and rum to last three days
Angela
Its such a shame your cousins covetous
A proud megalomaniac envy rid
I better understand your strong mood swings
Scene 3
Plasma
The narco sub has beached a sorry wreck
Survivors now swim diversely ashore
I brought a straggler bubbling up the hatch
Of its small conning tower through waves to air
I healed the superstructure watertight
And fixed electro mechanical faults

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Hector (cont.)
Adulterated to harmless dust
Or frozen isolated it might be
Ground off by teams of metal nanobots
But sadly money was his vital vice
He relegated labs to cut his costs
Short term and so soon fell behind his peers
In breakthroughs curative he damned us cranks
And touted cheap generic pills for all
Reluctant I agreed to meet with him
On downtown docks that we serve greater good
The ambush hit beneath container cranes
Without so much as sight of him and gagged
And bound and gunny sacking bagged I was
Shipped out to Carribean wild sea cast on
A decommissioned rudderless tug boat
Id heard my cousin cackle loud aye aye

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Scene 2
Hector
Its nought my doing know this bio robot dear
Angela our mortal foe are aboard
The narco sub yet I have not destroyed
Them using my considerable powers
Gaze once more on our magic crystal bouy
Angela
They battle valiantly in your swim zone
And so youre proven negligent thus far
Hector
Whats self inflicted is their business
And not ours Id be no samaritan
In Urep we were friendly rivals once
And we believed the many problems faced
By the world quite surmountable sad things
And we supported one anothers work
A cancer might be dealt to many ways

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Angela chants
Those hoods at sea in underworld they hark
To when their fish cold boss would feed on fear
Of late hes lost his dire predictive spark
Hes older dodders deep to death hes dear
Though metres long old tetchy tiger shark
Is sucked down by remora who cant bear
Their mentor more reduced an easier mark
And Neptune blunt them scuba divers spear
White ventrals grey blue dorsals too themselves
Now cobia pals of tiger shark deflate
With head butts their redundant hunting mate
A pilot fish now plugs gills closure delves
Sinking blindside by side yet well suited
Hes rock bottom bound the mood is muted

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Silvio (cont.)
Then he and I will exit ramming her
Entirely from the conning tower awash
With his small trunk of balsa wood
Assuredly bouyant nine tenths stale hot air
Youll scramble up the steel rungs one by one
That is last one out is a rotten egg
Giacomo
You were coerced into taking hostages
By former paramilitary troops
Collateral for ransom swamped for bucks
You are a naive sad patsy don Silvio
Silvio
On deep reflection I do think as much
Till we meet once more adios amigos

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Silvio (cont.)
Not one soul would miss any one of us
Giacomo
Ive swung the periscope full circle thrice
And factored out what look to be oil smears
A picture postcard is all I can see
Were at sea level stranded on some sort
Of coral island wrapped round its lagoon
Paolo
The splintered crates and fractured flasks slide on
Now washing from the hold our way in pools
We must abandon quick the narco sub
Silvio
Move pronto gracias down the nose cone end
First Giacomo undoes the batoned hatch
And lets the lady Gloria squeeze on past

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Silvio (cont.)
The current crisis is hot stinking air
Giacomo
Dear governor you owe us some respect
Full amnesties should we escape alive
We couldve simply executed you
At safe arms length with switch blades else hemp noose
Miguel
Did you not see me nodding powerful words
From Gloria our state counsel? special pleas
By high placed bureaucrats to presidents
Would be unconstitutional at best
Eduardo
As mayor I wholly back the governor
My eyes and ears arent bought so easily
Silvio
Then your ear dirt cheap is a cauliflower
Though kick back spared puffed by steel blue knock back

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Giacomo
A juvenile delinquent? thats not me
The government made me senorita
I still collect remand tithes here and there
As liaison officer no tithe no trial
Silvio
This is your final pistol whip enjoy
Giacomo
What it boils down to is youre ballast weight
Silvio
Climb up the conning tower and check the hatch
Senora know that ladies flush out first
Paolo
What Id give for any small high rise flat
Downtown with timeshare parking thrown in free
Miguel
The coral reef will be so slippery
Silvio
Youre thinking far too far ahead know all

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Scene 1

Silvio
Reverse propellers were now scratching cross
A coral reef reverse grease monkey hard
Wait till I get my hands on the crook who
Sold me this narco sub seagoing what crap
Dive depth five metres such piss Ive got all
His alias names on this crinkled scrap
The laws of short term karma slam on him
Giacomo
That horrible shrill creaking noise pains me
Have we confused magnetic north again
With true north? weve leant on luck far too much
Computing latitude by longitude
By altitude with compass square and pen
Theyre no match versus under ocean quake

The Atoll

Silvio
Si Ive rubbed padded shoulders with the best
Bribe takers one could plant on payroll list
Though high society will not be name dropped
You yourself are that noble geriatric
A selfish spinster Ive admired in chaos
For counselling at least one civil war
And brokering fat fees yours all the same
Gloria
Backhanded is the compliment but facts
Are facts you wont escape the law so quick
Youre still young relatively Giacomo
Rehabilitation awaits your soul
The penitentiary would do you good
But Silvio can expect the supermax

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Silvio
Amigo old or no he will be crushed
The fingerprints removed by surgery
In operating theatres situated
Right side of town arent slippery enough
Pals will avenge this misadventure fast
Giacomo
Silvio I must untie the gags and cords
Which bind our hostages to ransom notes
Silvio
Release the human ballast Giacomo
Giacomo
Theyre nodding furiously to proof of life
I think theyll get the drift of undertow
Silvio
The self absorbed senora Gloria first
Gloria
Do you know who this is youre dealing with?

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Silvio
Surrender rudder wheel man periscope
Dumbkopf gringo wouldnt be read first time
A narco sub went missing all souls lost
In the Bermuda triangle just because
A map was held the wrong way round and wet
Giacomo
The shonky diesel motors spluttering
It smacks of Pedros cheapskate handiwork
Silvio
I know his signature we fenced bank safes
And salsa bar strongboxes when rash youths
Si even then he cribbed a metal gauge
By vernier pocketing a gram or two
Dino
Bog is showing through fresh painted fibreglass

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Scene 1

Silvio
Reverse propellors were now scratching cross
A coral reef reverse grease monkey hard
Wait till I get my hands on the crook who
Sold me this narco sub seagoing what crap
Dive depth five metres such piss Ive got all
His alias names on this crinkled scrap
The laws of short term karma slam on him
Giacomo
That horrible shrill creaking noise pains me
Have we confused magnetic north again
With true north? weve leant on luck far too much
Computing latitude by longitude
By altitude with compass square and pen
Theyre no match versus under ocean quake

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Prologue chant

Angela
Perhaps I ought to strike out on my own
As my poor wizard surely knows it all
Or somehow feels obliged to lilt high flown
In talking large he squashes me down small
Although hes mostly lost in thoughts unknown
The zero population growth dire pall
Allows him luxury of his self clone
Myself infertile I could boldly bawl
In eerie peace beneath surf waves that pound
Lie treasure troves all types of wrecks
This astrolabe that traverse board I found
Embossed with detritus in punctured decks
The wizard minds a museum hails the hoard
Of artefacts that tax payers cant afford

characters

The Atoll

by KQJ

Characters
Miguel - governor of a state
Felix - son of the governor
Hector - disappeared wizard
Salvatore - young man about town
Gianni - young man about town
Dino - scab narco sub engineer
Silvio - boss of a coke cartel
Giacomo - captain in a coke cartel
Paolo - socialite heir
Eduardo - mayor of a borough
Gloria - centeganarian counsel to mayor
Angela - prototype bio-robot
Plasma - a scrap of starman
Europa and friends - mermaid and merman robots from
the icy moons of Saturn and Jupiter
Albin - vitiligo afflicted diminished twins

An interactive movie comedy in 220 emails set in the Bermuda triangle

sonnet xxxxvi

sonnet xxxxvi from 10.07.

I had a crystal clear take on wet things
Unmoved by theories that part stuff from soul
If out of sorts you squirmed the gold fish bowl
With flirty histrionics and freak mood swings
I knew a womans heart loved rocks on rings
That tampons monthly took their troubling toll
That bloody birth stood any girls prime goal
I knew our future beyond the flaunted flings
I peeped my Pip saw part of what they meant
She looked aloof then laughed a lot with boys
Her barely it was envy filled I bent
A yearning ear to lusty loud white noise
I heeded my own voluble advice
I found new lovers cool as cocktail ice

Chorus
o advice
o counsel
o instruction

by KQJ

sonnet xxxxvi from 10.07

sonnet xxxxvi from 10.07.

I had a crystal clear take on wet things
Unmoved by theories that part stuff from soul
If out of sorts you squirmed the gold fish bowl
With flirty histrionics and freak mood swings
I knew a womans heart loved rocks on rings
That tampons monthly took their troubling toll
That bloody birth stood any girls prime goal
I knew our future beyond the flaunted flings
I peeped my Pip saw part of what they meant
She looked aloof then laughed a lot with boys
It was her barely envy filled I bent
A yearning ear to lusty white noise
I heeded my own voluble advice
I found new lovers cool as cocktail ice

Chorus
o advice
o counsel
o instruction

by KQJ

Mega

header

phone numbers

casino tower and satellite

sonnet 18.10.07

sonnet 18.10.07.
My foetus on cat scan through stethoscope
Was smiling happy bobbing from her cord
My bitch breasts full protruded hard as board
Ached solemnly with birth Id somehow cope
I was numb stung by epidural dope
My slit was shorn bald and hygiene underscored
White rubber gloves engagingly explored
The midwife gave my navel one last grope
To lighten things I let my husband browse
Hed immersed himself the last trimester
Presence welcome anxious did he pester
Caesarean in play I began to rouse
The baby plus her afterbirth lump sum
I worried whether Id smile laugh or come

Chorus

o sum
o lot
o total

fatalism

The script kept shrinking till it looked like it was going to be a one act play then it started growing again to full play length after which it looked like a decent demo that might be a couple of drafts off a work of art.
KQJ

sonnet 28.6.13.
You need the nous to save your pretty face
You might just trade up tiers and take a god
Just give me better looking boy the nod
Adonis like Ill pose beau him replace
I can read your mind youre a classic case
As you cant quite quit older tracks youve trod
My suave and witty ways for you arent odd
What you regret is envying his warm grace
As you broke off from him its your mishap
Theres no way you can get with him again
And you cant summon him by finger snap
It bodes if you cling more youll languish bane
Drop nostalgia your by halves behaviour
If your true self then Im your savvy saviour

Chorus

o behaviour
o gesture
o mannerism

The script has been uploaded as 220 emails and each sits beautifully on a mobile phone screen the shape and size of a playing card.  The next phase is funding.  :) :0 :) Whos betting against us?

The script is a benchmark for the rest.  Its a case of fourth time lucky.
A new class of submarine, a type of mini sub appeared in the meantime,
something that could fit and be sectioned on a theatre stage.