Revised sonnet #1316
Tank full but full tread flat tyre raises ire
By Demoguspoe desert cotton fields
The axle jacked up just on sun expire
Tyre iron trawled up and your arm yanks and wields
The passing locomotive we admire
Bells mute the metal arm in lift then yields
Though lack of passports pans out never dire
Beyond level crossing coppers show their shields
On gallivant of Noeno everglade
An anaconda alligator zips
Bayou focus point of scarey skinny dips
Or whiskey stills in camouflage and shade
I learnt a lot off you as harvest hand
I love the earthy smells that link to land
Chorus hand mano ruka