Revised sonnet #1401
A rendezvous on cards at eight oclock
A gastro bar adjacent Porpoise pier
A stern executive I sussed the dear
I sat on stool I scanned the forming flock
I love the ladies loaded dodge dry dock
I wait on crimson combs above an ear
I notice nerves inside a smooth veneer
I mint a move and her eyes mildly mock
Ive come a distance since fast food and bus
I lick at hummus floor the flashiest car
Ive many options just one movie star
I guess youre jealous go ahead and cuss
You get a life the bulk up no booboo
You shed snake skin in lame Otahuhu
Chorus booboo error mistake