Revised sonnet #1532

Youre plump and underwear elastic pinch
Those frumpy frocks the momentary fix
You wont wear knee tall boots till legs are sticks
Down sizes nine and eight youd wind the winch
I clasp your moods youre farthest from a cinch
Your smiles show white teeth pearls allow lip licks
Yet how you hurt this heart its notions nix
I love the less than perfect pounds to inch
Your locks are like a mass of fine twirled gold
You wear a florid frock that serves as foil
To folds of fat it keeps out winter cold
It hints at summer salads cooled in oil
On Caffjes statues stamps of gold act patch
Your spare tyre sucks yet its a buddy match
Chorus patch bit scrap

Revised sonnet #1538

I love your sulk that hives off hissy fit
Your silence seeds amusement more or less
Ive hurt you horribly Id rightly guess
You nod you shrug you grin you signal it
Default insight you sense our life a skit
A laugh track would derail the humdrum mess
Youd like to clinically shrink duress
You care about the consequence one bit
The many mundane masks conceal your soul
You fidget lonely languish out of reach
You seek escape estranged on edge a doll
I drift off mute and drowsy fail to preach
Exceptional just like the crowd of us
You shy away on wary mumble cuss
Chorus us nous os

Revised sonnet #1535

You stride straight upon the leaking landing
Plastic plants in stands set stiff six in row
Forty watt wall washer lamps disbanding
Wrinkles melt away in weak good gold glow
Tinted lids on spectacles upstanding
Squinting stockstill someone I need not know
Your impatient presence strikes commanding
Your designer suit strikes sassy style show
Beard dyed black a bald head buzz cut on whole
Stuck in penny stocks a leveraged shirt
You edge by abrupt and I cringe fine dirt
Media made meals out of your deduced role
Students puffing bookmark munted small spliff
Youd talk mammaries make me a mite stiff
Chorus spliff joint toke

Revised sonnet #1534

Shall she shush and query every query?
Shall she squint her eyes hard so sip a kiss?
Shall she saunter easy stand off eerie?
What are bumblers suspect signs bits youd miss?
Is she calculating cool and leery?
Is she perpetrating eye beams in bliss?
Is she mesmerising chuckles cheery?
What are mumblers suspect signs beyond your hiss?
Is little love acquired unbiased enough?
Is heated hatred hardest gutting gall?
Is quick apology a kind of crawl?
Is raw opinion dealt to diamonds rough?
I bear hug her hard high heels off this deck
If her eyes back beam is it booty check?
Chorus deck floor plateau

Revised sonnet #1554 by kqj

These eyes are captivated by her curves
Her mammaries are larders camel like
Her eyes hold back tears as if dam or dike
Her mind is met through open ended nerves
I want to search her substance stuff it serves
I wonder should I pounce and pash or pike
I sense her soul suppresses slump and spike
Her dainty moves to me are like hors doeuvres
Her vest is deep and quivers cleavage shade
Her skin is smooth as silk and free of fluff
Her lips impress a straw in lemonade
Her skirt is stitched on sensible enough
The cactus bloom is lodged arrear her ear
A milling mob may idly nudge her near
Chorus ear aoyer oor

Revised sonnet #1545

I leapt the fence to fetch a rubber ball
Whom might I meet? chameleon she
A gorgeous girl whod grown up over all
Her glasses gone her eyes completely free
We strolled inside I laid off any gall
I asked what would work worthwhile one day be
I might end mesmerised and kept on call
We stirred steel spoons we sipped tea gingerly
Her kind of love I learnt arranged reach out
I seethed the vacancy of second slot
I needed so to tie the nuptial knot
Devoid of values virtuous none Id flout
Theres nothing bad in being a man of straw
If parroting a partner filled with awe
Chorus straw stro stroy