Revised sonnet #1550

The chicks Ive chased a set of quasi skanks
Were nice enough I nabbed a lode of luck
In backs of cars theyd kiss and finger buck
I suffered selflessly their petty pranks
I aim to say thanks not now filling blanks
That marginal news never mar with muck
If good if bad I couldnt coarsely chuck
I fear Ill polarise the outer ranks
I know youre near I sense your smile and frown
I feel well click it suddenly seems strange
I could accommodate you up or down
A friend of friends fits you fetchingly in range
Ill love at first or final gasp Ill greet
Youre off one block I fathom psychic feat
Chorus greet hail salute

Revised sonnet #1553

A consciousness I sense is set upon
Each optic nerve Id make a mortal match
Of blindspots forking sun a path and patch
At baked in blindness light is lightly shone
A wizards cone and robes I dared to don
X y and z appeared the smallest batch
Of letter cubes in luck I could unlatch
I dived in dictionaries good as gone
I wondered wayward why was y a y?
I wouldnt budge unhinged off whole and hole
The disc and circle ws quiet role
I fathomed star and hole in naked eye
A wizard starts a spell at easy bits
And quizzical on heaven later hits
Chorus bits fragments parts

Sea krait and snapping turtle

Vujotsu chants
1.
Dodo perched on bonsai bough
Warbled warning set in song
Hush affair a broken vow
It made me mad was way wrong
Rules of club just dont allow
Secret lovers slam the gong
Junior member mightnt plough
Someone elses mistress long
2.
Wife and I ensconced at Noh
I eyed over lovers aches
What we watched in gaudy show
Save of faces flame of fakes
Mistress mine imposter kissed
By the soldier I then dreamt
Wondrous he expired in mist
Further fault tried I to preempt
3.
Dodo warbled worthwhile sight
Junior lying in bubble bath
Lame or limp no sign of fight
Sandal prints in sudsy path
Bottom sunk electric jug
From a socket set in wall
Over rim ran cord to plug
Bobbing him toy duck and ball
4.
Junior judged as prone to err
Sentence small and down to size
Breakthrough science and he concur
Shell of self in sweeping eyes
His the second chance as clone
Bonsai bred off his own bone
Hell alight on my old knee
Memory void fresh and free
5.
Sea krait skin stripes black on white
Chases khaki carapace
Snapping turtle snaps on sight
Sea krait strikes fangs face to face
Snapping turtles throat turns red
Sea krait swims up sucks sweet air
Snapping turtle limp is lead
Lifeless lands in sea kraits lair

Shoeshine boy
A horsehair brush and rag and black dye wax
A shinier coat on leather prone to cracks
A horsehair brush and rag and black dye creme
A kinder coat to leather less of gleam

Plainclothes detective
That shoeshine boy chants clearly crooked code
A Vujotsu or Stonefish smitten ode

Inland revenue bureaucrat
I saw that fellow who you polished first
Afforded no tip such evaders worst

sonnet by kqj

Stonefish
The finest health is framed on innocent old me
Consecutive life sentences imply
One hundred years of age Ill walk out free
The jail time served Ill decades later die
Ive paid the dues I perch on apogee
Of precinct markets vicious rivals vie
A broken blade is buried near a knee
And bullet shrapnel sits arrear an eye
In meantime business I delegate
Through eager middle men the heists and skims
They follow orders weighty plots or whims
Theyll land in jail they judge I watch their fate

Defence lawyer
The paid and planted snitch we shall appeal
The cops are crooks to do a dirty deal

Chorus appeal challenge question

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Dr Kookikredo
Its Stonefishs handiwork Ive sussed that style
A soldier paid to march the extra mile
She sags stiff from a frosted carcase hook
Inside our freezer dead as donor chook
When we wrought bonsai big beast fish and fowl
At smaller carbon credit could none howl
She sliced a steak expelled junk DNA
She steamed off water sog theirs sweat astray
A prototype the luncheon roll of whale
Its gristle grease and keratin to scale
A hint of husks of wheat and oven ash
In xanthan gum grown grey the healthy hash
These glasses freeze tears my ice cold calves cramp
On pet and owner rolls shes struck the stamp
Chorus cramp pang spasm

Shoeshine boy
The termites timbre is farts of methane gas
They knock out knots as paper mache frass
The flying ant farts on Icuadorian shore
An outback termite mound is cracked to core

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Vujotsu
I strayed young sought out soulless shooting pool
The balls of plastic cast in dies uncool
The balls of dentine dead the dearest dream
I hit on marks in halls in hustling meme
I overchalked the cue I dithered dumb
I let the mark enlarge the betting sum
I waged the unders or else overs win
I sank abruptly balls on guarded grin
I wanted most the genuine grown up game
The ramps and balance to rack all balls the same
The ivory orbs shaped in sculptors hands
In antique shops struck far from foreign lands
A boss appeared I got the lucky break
I struck the black ball home for black tooths sake
Chorus break fracture schism

Shoeshine boy
The killer whales teeth twist the thick skinned shark
The mightier apex predator is off the mark
The killer whales once sharp teeth worn to stumps
She sucks shark pups soft gastric juices pumps

Revised sonnet #666 by kqj

Hostess
Extortion tickles pink that cheat of cheats
I suck cigars suggested by oyabun
A glass of whiskey clicked the cockles heats
I share a limousine swank seat its fun
He proofs the first edition scandal sheets
Unmarked mark money muffles looming run
The profit lying in bought off pinpoint bleats
He fondles my bone blouse back buttons done
A hostess versed who helps him proof each page
I tutut ledgers light or heavy cook of books
I tsktsk photo frames of mistress nooks
I underscore in red Im worth the wage
In Lecadjo just jammed an amber light
Our driver digs in he turns honking right
Chorus light blaze effulgence

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Zutjou
Above those waves I breathed on bulbous strand
I was resuscitated by a band
Of villagers so sunk in snorkel dive
That tsunami list left us low alive
That inch tall tsunami swift struck at sea
Thumped our skiff side on so it skewed to lee
I lost an arm that moored a local map
The bump set off a bouncing blasting cap
We buy the blasting caps at battlefield
Their unexploded casing steel still sealed
They oxygenate seascape knell niche nets
As fish float belly up in bubbling jets
Yes Vujotsu sourced me a stronger cyber arm
Im nicknamed Fiddler Crab and whats the harm?
Chorus arm arm arm

Shoeshine boy
The porpoise sucked a puffer fish
And happy high inspired a dish
The porpoise plonked in pepper sauce
Is cat and owners gourmet course

Shoeshine boy
Swell shark you make inferior fools a meal
You frown upon your flounder crab and eel
Acquired taste is your dodgy dorsal fin
Enjoy your bunk at Bottom Feeder Inn
Ichi
You mustnt lamely join a local gang
They dress and pose alike and spout street slang
The individual dude deemed nought
To blind obedience bends abruptly brought
I live a life of feelings free of mould
I drub a debtor saddened never cold

Revised sonnet by kqj

Vujotsu
The seasoned shark fins float sops on soup
Your waiter says theyre flies that looped the loop
Your lemon fish is just a ray or rig
The fins a fib unshredded not too big
An iodised salt stops dead your drunken slur
An ocean salt stops dead your myopic blur
A fine fare fins of shark in bowl or boat
To choice of salt you should address your vote
Nazo
The little krill is furnished little brain
And activists delegate it disdain
They hail huge dux and then they slam small dunce
They shun a common ancestor at once
The whale is monument to massive feed
The krill they kill are sucked in fill a need
Chorus feed munch scoff