Revised sonnet #1624
They sniff at our being young yell you're unfit
True love talk practical and hurdle wise
They didn't stop to spot us portrait size
They fired at us concerns wed first admit
A globe grinds green it loses grime and grit
The nuclear family of little lies
Is what we watch whacked down to atomise
Today's divorce incentives come in kit
In love well last at least one century
In health in sickness streaming each stem cell
Through peaks of fortune vales of penury
In megalopolis well love well dwell
Ingeniously though we rig right their wrong
The future looks like ours stands strung along
Chorus wrong error fault