Revised sonnet #539
Pips the beautiful near perfect model
Ego mine taps chivalry tweaks tired themes
Say she should short fall Id mollycoddle
Rescuing her Ill regulate such staged schemes
Self improvement meme methinks a doddle
When I speak to her engaging gold gleams
Her eyes spin out elemental swaddle
Sparkling mist they weave on my dumb day dreams
Wide awake I wait on blatant blunder
Factual error fraught view squeamish stutter
Her Ill rescue under pressure utter
Plonked on Pegasus equestrian wonder
Better blunder soon and save the story
Should I stride in fast Id gab in glory
Chorus story tale yarn
