Revised sonnet #548
Muse of mine assaults via civil slurring
Mellow chinese whispers met in mumbling
Im too finicky thats kind of humbling
I nod sarcasm served thus keep concurring
Frozen smirks express a fear of erring
Paralytic I abandon bumbling
Soporific I envision stumbling
Mirror me a statue scarcely stirring
Loving nature her part prime palaver
She scolds sister sort Id sooner marry
Sibling rivalry a sin to parry
Gentler soul is likeliest left cadaver
Ive approved of her as pretty faulted
Flood of feelings frankly further halted
Chorus faulted blemishes tarnished
