Revised sonnet #517
Say they that theres surely someone better
Who imparts prepossessed calm and caring
Current livein chimes in follows letter
Zero effort echoes me tale sharing
Mates of his evaluate me the fetter
Whisper loudly munt of manners daring
He agrees in nods thoughts never airing
He avoids eye contact my eyes wetter
Cold is he in charm Im justly jealous
Second child is he and closed to other
Sibling rivalry afflicting brother
Pastimes shared thats when theyre zealous
Lack of gumption find I madly moving
Though to think it shown as disapproving
Chorus moving shifting travelling
