Revised sonnet #530
The gang informed that green grape garden bar
The grapes resembled notes upon a stave
A waiter served the wine and cheese I crave
I scoped the gorgeous girls on stools afar
I faced four fools all innocents on par
I cringed their noble nods a fervent wave
I crossed the crowded floor abrupt and brave
I bumped a girl a bit and didnt spar
I had one browsing my ripe collar bone
I had one smooching my strong sensual hips
I had one licking my arched lilac lips
I had one puffing my vast pelvic zone
I left the restroom regally to cap
They grinned at pad that dressed the ankle gap
Chorus cap end finish