Revised sonnet #1593
It pleases now Ive caught you longest last
Id gotten grumpy nuzzling choosy chicks
I miss the prepubescent perfect picks
As adult metrics follow money caste
You peer past petrified and problem past
To future fun your chitchat only flicks
In care of kids is where you get your kicks
Your valiant aura positively vast
You waive a mask expecting realists reach
You skip your mum and dad your suitor screen
Your rituals rule you knit iron cook and clean
I like that lots I promise not to leech
You sigh at hindsight simplified and freak
The thinnest thread of gold is surely chic
Chorus freak peculiar strange