Revised sonnet #1646
A time we were as one wed quite unique
I saw you surely my immortal muse
I knew youd never massively enthuse
A secret lover brought a certain pique
He watched you brush a bang off either cheek
He clapped your spritz of scent a standard ruse
He bought your bob hair style and blouse in blues
He was as pleased as punch agreeably geek
A microscope slide shows your quirks yet worse
I view you water ice inviting schism
A sun struck jelly standing gnomon prism
All anti atoms other universe
He over scrutinises when youre trite
Your foe couch fade off ultraviolet light
Chorus trite banal hackneyed